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(This commentary was added in 2017)
First page I ever drew!
…At the time, I had no plans for what she was doing up there.
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So nowadays, I make the comics entirely digitally. But for all of Episode 0, I was doing the comic in traditional media (markers + pens). It was really fun in a lot of ways, but digital ultimately made more sense.
Since this was my first attempt at proper comic pages, I was still figuring out how to do lettering. I tried my best, with varying results. Suffice to say a lot of early dialogue came out a little hard to read. Fortunately, you can find dialogue transcripts under every Ep 0 page! (It’s my goal to get transcripts for all of them eventually.)
Ultimately? I’ll probably redraw these early comics, but I don’t plan on doing that for a little while yet.
A teenager [Violet] with very long hair is plummeting downwards from high in the sky.
Violet: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Panel 2
Far below lies a modern city. Various buildings, homes, and stretches of urban parkland are criss-crossed by a grid of bustling streets.
Violet: (while still screaming) [thinking] Well, /this/ isn't how I wanted to start my day.