Commentary added April 10, 2016

Avi Square hmm

I remember being so upset at the time I drew this page because I’d accidentally made Coby’s face look flushed and there was no way to fix it. That’s the trouble with traditional media.

Looking back at the art for these pages, though, I’m always pleasantly surprised. It’s never as terrible as I remember it being.

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Panels 1 and 2
{Coby running towards falling Violet}

Panel 3
{Coby catches Violet}

Panel 4
{Coby has overshot the sidewalk. Over a forty-foot drop.}

Panel 5
{Both, screaming, continue to plummet.}