Commentary added April 10, 2016

Avi Square hmm

I remember being so upset at the time I drew this page because I’d accidentally made Coby’s face look flushed and there was no way to fix it. That’s the trouble with traditional media.

Looking back at the art for these pages, though, I’m always pleasantly surprised. It’s never as terrible as I remember it being.

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Panels 1
Coby is running towards the falling Violet, who sees him as she nears the ground.

Panel 3
Coby makes a running leap.

Panel 4
Coby catches Violet in his arms.

Panel 4
It would seem that in his rush to catch Violet, Coby has overshot the sidewalk. Unfortunately for both of them, he has done so over a deep, sudden drop.

Panel 5
Both, screaming, continue to plummet. Around the corner, there's a construction sign.
Sign: WARNING - SIDEWALK ENDS AHEAD - THIS AREA UNDER CONSTRUCTION